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November 8, 2010

The Rewriting Merry-Go-Round by Lillian Grant

Filed under: Writing life — dangerouslysexy @ 04:00
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I have been on the same ride for weeks. There are no pretty ponies or scary tigers, no flashing lights or cheerful music. My writing world is full of silence, darkness and pain.

Stories you have written are more than just words on a page. They’re friends, good friends. Some days your characters won’t behave and you hate them, some days the words all but type themselves and you love them, but no matter what kind of day it is they’re yours. Kind of like children really.

Remember your child’s first day at school? How proud you felt. How you had this fear in your gut they would come home at the end of the day crying or they would cling to you so hard they would never even make it through the school gate? Submitting your manuscript to a publisher feels a lot like that.

You follow their guidelines, press send and then you wait, and wait, and wait. – You get the picture – Eventually you get a response. Of late, mine have all been the same. We like it …but. They want changes. A full explanation follows of what it is about your story that doesn’t work for them. Not enough sex, the sex isn’t hot enough, too many coincidences to make the plot work, etc etc. After you take it all in you need to decide to either move on and submit somewhere else or make the changes they want. The decision in some cases is easier than others. If it’s just a tweak that you know will make your story better then you leap at it. If it’s more severe and threatens the whole structure of your plot you may dither and go either way.

I decided to go with making the changes on two different manuscripts. That is when my carousel ride began. I wrote and rewrote and resubmitted…now I am back to waiting.

After three weeks I am getting dizzy. In the movie Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas Raoul Duke and his Samoan Lawyer visit a circus themed casino when they are high on more than just life. They ride the merry-go-round drinking at the bar in the middle but when they want to get off the Lawyer, played by Benicio Del Toro, can’t do it. It takes a boot up the backside from Johnny Depp to get him off the ride. I know how the lawyer was feeling and just hope my Raoul Duke wanders along to boot me off the rewriting merry-go-round sometime soon before I start asking people if they were the ones fucking polar bears.

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  1. LOL………God…….that last sentence made me wake up everyone in my house at 5:30 in the morning. That’s some funny s#!t right there. I would come up with a substantive comment but I’m too busy busting a gut over here….

    Comment by Cornelle — November 8, 2010 @ 04:48 | Reply

  2. I’m with Cornelle. Hi Cornelle! Walk slowly away from the Polar bears, step off the carousel. Obviously, whatever the issue is with the R/R, it has nothing to do with your way with words.

    Our work is like our children, perfect in our eyes. It is painful when others see them as less than that, even more so when despite our better judgment we change them to suit only to be rejected again.

    Comment by Debbie Vaughan — November 8, 2010 @ 05:36 | Reply

  3. Hey hey hey, I see fucking polar bears ALL the time. Hee :D, Now Janet, let the force flow through you and in you. You will soon discover the way of the Jedi! Of course, a little r/r may get in the way but you will have learned and grown. Years from now, you’ll look back and say, wow, I’m so glad I r/r that manuscript!

    Comment by Jadette — November 8, 2010 @ 05:53 | Reply

  4. Oh, oh, analogies! Yay!

    Remember how the munchkin cried and clung at the door to kindergarten: “No, Mommy!”…and then came home, tiny chest stuck out with pride, showing off his gold star on his first school paper? Sometimes you have to shove the babies out the door so they can grow. 🙂

    Ouch! Mommy, Lillian just hit me! And used a bad word. Fine, I’m picking up my polar bears and going home.

    Comment by Cherise Sinclair — November 8, 2010 @ 09:19 | Reply

  5. I am glad I amuse you all. I wasn’t sure about the Polar Bear line but hey it’s from the movie..blame Hunter S Thompson, he came up with the idea. I am still on the Merry-go-round…weehee.

    Comment by Lillian Grant — November 8, 2010 @ 13:36 | Reply

    • My merry-go-round only has werewolves, grumbling enviously about Lillian’s polar bears.

      Comment by dangerouslysexy — November 8, 2010 @ 13:59 | Reply

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